Kia ora and welcome to my blog today
Should schooling all be done online ?
In my opinion i do not believe that all schooling be done online . Would you want to be stuck at home all the time or be in a fun classroom?
Firstly learning at school is better because face to face teaching is best you have to concentrate more and being on a screen all the time can be distracting , hard on your eyes and make you tired.
Secondly i would miss seeing my friends and being able to do gymnastics outside in the fresh air on a sunny day with them on my breaks which i really enjoy and it makes me happy .
Thank you for listening to my opinions on this topic.
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Hi Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteI agree with your opinion of not having school online all the time. It’s definitely a lot harder on a screen and not face to face in the classroom. And you certainly miss your friends and the fun you have during the break times too.
I liked how you highlighted the 3 different sentence types you used to help make up your piece of writing. Next time just check that the word “I” is always a capital letter! Well done.
Hi Kirstin,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment I will definitely add capital letter I. Also it is good to highlight the sentences that we are working on.
Mikayla